Saturday, September 25, 2010

I Swear I'm Perfectly Normal...

This semester I'm taking creative writing, and right now we're in our poetry unit. This was the last poem I wrote-- Tell me what you think about it! :)

Waves envelop me
As I wade into the water.
Colors, more than one would imagine
Swirl around me as I sink slowly.
Memories flash through my mind,
My first kiss,
My last argument,
Holding my baby sister in my arms.
I feel nothing anymore,
No pain, no joy,
Only emptiness,
As slowly, my world fades to black.

1 comment:

Josie said...

p.s. great to experience your writing again. Thanks for sharing!